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Shatterpoint
Fandom: Star Wars
Created: 6/2/2026
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Science FictionSpace OperaActionDramaAngstCharacter StudyTragedyCanon SettingGraphic Violence
The Shattered Discipline
The humid air of Haruun Kal clung to the Jedi like a heavy shroud. It was a world of lethal beauty and endless fog, a place that Mace Windu called home, yet one that had recently become a graveyard for the Republic’s finest.
"The separatist communications array is shielded from the north," Obi-Wan Kenobi said, wiping sweat from his brow as he adjusted the holoprojector. "If we approach as a single unit, their long-range scanners will pick up our signatures long before we reach the perimeter."
Mace Windu nodded, his dark eyes scanning the dense jungle canopy. "Agreed. We split. Obi-Wan, you and I will circle the western ridge to disable the shield generator. Skywalker, you and Depa will take the eastern pass. Your objective is to secure the landing platform. Do not engage Grievous unless it is absolutely necessary for the mission's success."
Anakin Skywalker adjusted his glove, his blue eyes flickering with a restless energy. "If we have a shot at him, Master, we should take it. Ending Grievous ends the war."
"Caution, Anakin," Depa Billaba said softly, her voice carrying a weight that hadn't been there before the war. She had only recently emerged from a six-month coma following a devastating defeat at the hands of the General on this very planet. Her movements were fluid, yet there was a shadow in her gaze. "Grievous does not fight fairly. He thrives on chaos."
"Then we'll bring the chaos to him," Anakin countered, though he gave her a respectful nod.
The groups parted ways. As Anakin and Depa moved through the thick undergrowth, the silence of the jungle was punctuated only by the distant hum of droid patrols. Anakin pushed forward with an aggressive pace, his senses reaching out through the Force. Suddenly, he froze.
"I feel him," Anakin whispered, crouching behind a massive fern.
Below them, in a clearing near the landing pad, the metallic clatter of General Grievous was unmistakable. The cyborg was standing alone, his back turned, seemingly distracted by a malfunctioning tactical droid.
"It’s a perfect opening," Anakin hissed, his hand hovering over his lightsaber. "If we drop down now, we can pin him before his bodyguards arrive."
Depa laid a hand on his shoulder, her touch firm. "No, Anakin. Something is wrong. The perimeter is too light. It’s a trap."
"It’s an opportunity," Anakin snapped. "I’m not letting him slip away again."
Before Depa could protest further, Anakin ignited his blade—a brilliant flash of sapphire—and leaped from the ridge.
"Anakin, wait!" Depa cried out.
As Anakin descended, the 'malfunctioning' droid suddenly straightened, and the jungle floor erupted. Hidden panels slid back to reveal a dozen IG-100 MagnaGuards, their electrostaffs crackling with purple energy. Grievous spun around, his mechanical laugh a dry, rasping cough.
"Skywalker," the General hissed, his four arms unfolding with sickening mechanical precision. "I expected the Negotiator, but the Hero with no Fear will do nicely."
Anakin was instantly swarmed. He deflected blows with frantic speed, but the MagnaGuards were programmed to exploit the slightest gap in a Jedi’s defense. A staff caught him in the ribs, sending him reeling. Grievous lunged, his four lightsabers spinning like deadly saws.
Depa Billaba didn't hesitate. She plummeted into the fray, her green blade a whirlwind of Chalactan grace. She parried two of Grievous’s blades, positioning herself between the General and the recovering Anakin.
"Run, Anakin! Get to the ridge!" she commanded.
"I'm not leaving you!" Anakin shouted, cutting through a droid’s neck.
Grievous let out a guttural growl. "You will both die here!"
He accelerated his attack, a blur of motion that even a Master of Depa’s caliber struggled to track. The trauma of her previous defeat flickered in her mind—the smell of ozone, the crushing weight of metal. She overextended to block a strike aimed at Anakin’s head. Grievous seized the opening. One of his mechanical feet kicked her with bone-shattering force, and as she fell, he brought a lightsaber down across her torso.
A scream tore from Depa's throat as she collapsed.
"Depa!" Anakin roared. He tapped into a well of dark frustration, unleashing a Force push that sent the MagnaGuards flying and momentarily staggered Grievous. He scooped up Depa’s limp form and retreated into the dense fog, his lungs burning as he sprinted toward the rendezvous point.
***
The small, abandoned stone hut on the cliffside offered little protection, but it was all they had. Rain began to lash against the roof as Mace Windu and Obi-Wan Kenobi arrived, having heard the commotion.
Mace dropped to his knees beside Depa, his face a mask of controlled fury as he saw the cauterized wound across her chest. She was unconscious, her breathing shallow and ragged.
"What happened?" Mace’s voice was a low, dangerous rumble.
"We saw an opening," Anakin said, pacing the small room, his cloak torn. "Grievous was right there. I thought—"
"You thought?" Mace stood up, looming over the younger man. "You were ordered to secure the platform, not to indulge your arrogance. You fell for the most transparent trap in the General’s book, and Depa paid the price for your recklessness."
"I was trying to end the war, Master Windu!" Anakin shouted back. "If I had been a second faster—"
"If you had been a second more disciplined, she wouldn't be dying!" Mace stepped into Anakin’s personal space, his Vaapad-trained energy radiating off him in waves. "You lack the restraint of a Master, Skywalker. Your impulsiveness is a rot in this Order."
"Enough!" Obi-Wan stepped between them, his hands raised. "Mace, fighting him won't heal Depa. Anakin, sit down. We are surrounded."
The sound of mechanical footsteps echoed outside. Hundreds of droids were closing in, led by the rhythmic 'thump-clank' of the General.
Anakin looked at the door, then at Depa, then at the window. His eyes were desperate. "We can't hold this hut. Not with her in this state. If we try to carry her out, Grievous will catch us in the open and kill all three of us."
"We are not leaving her," Mace said flatly.
Anakin turned to Mace, his expression darkening. "Listen to me. If we use Depa as a distraction—if we leave her here with a thermal detonator rigged to the door—we can draw Grievous in. When he goes for the trophy, we strike from the roof. We sacrifice one to take out the monster. It’s the only way to ensure the rest of us survive and the mission succeeds."
The silence that followed was suffocating.
Mace Windu’s hand flew to his lightsaber hilt. "You would suggest sacrificing a member of the Council? Your fellow Jedi? Have you lost your mind, Skywalker?"
"I’m being a realist!" Anakin yelled. "Look at her! She can’t move! If we stay, we all die, and Grievous wins. Is that what you want? To die for a sense of honor while the galaxy burns?"
"It is not honor, it is life!" Mace’s voice shook with rage. "We do not trade lives. That is the path to the dark side, a path I see you walking more clearly every day."
"I am trying to save you!" Anakin stepped forward, his chest heaving. "I am trying to save the Republic!"
"You are trying to hide your failure behind a cold-blooded murder," Mace hissed.
Obi-Wan looked between them, his heart sinking. The bond between the Jedi was fraying before his eyes. "Anakin, that is enough. We will defend this position together. We do not abandon our own."
"Then we die for nothing," Anakin whispered, turning away to stare at the door.
Outside, the rasping voice of Grievous drifted through the cracks in the stone. "Jedi! I can smell your fear. Come out and face your end, or I shall burn this hovel to ash with you inside!"
Mace Windu ignited his purple blade, the light reflecting in his eyes. "Get ready."
The door exploded inward. Grievous charged, his sabers spinning in a kaleidoscope of death. Mace met him head-on, their blades clashing with a shower of sparks that illuminated the cramped hut. Anakin and Obi-Wan took the flanks, hacking through the B2 super battle droids that poured through the breach.
The fight was desperate. The hut was too small for the Jedi to use their mobility. Mace pushed Grievous back with sheer physical power, but the General used his mechanical weight to pin Mace against the back wall.
"Your apprentice failed you, Windu," Grievous laughed, his metal fingers clawing at Mace’s throat. "And now, you shall join her!"
Just as Grievous raised his sabers for a killing blow, a brilliant, shimmering green light filled the room.
A wave of pure Force energy surged through the hut, not with the violence of a blast, but with the irresistible weight of the ocean. Grievous was hurled backward, crashing through the stone wall and into the mud outside. The droids were swept away like autumn leaves.
In the doorway stood a small, hunched figure leaning on a gnarled wooden cane. Behind him, the roar of LAAT/i gunships drowned out the storm, and dozens of clone troopers in the colors of the 41st Elite Corps rappelled from the sky.
"Patience, you must have, Master Windu," Yoda said, his ears twitching as he looked at the wreckage of the room. "Arrived, the reinforcements have."
Mace exhaled, his shoulders sagging as the adrenaline began to fade. He looked at Anakin, who wouldn't meet his gaze.
"Master Yoda," Obi-Wan said, his voice filled with relief. "Your timing is, as always, impeccable."
"Meditated on the Force, I did," Yoda said, walking slowly toward the unconscious Depa. He placed a small hand on her forehead, closing his eyes. "Much pain, I feel. Much anger. Dangerous, this conflict is."
***
The journey back to Coruscant was silent.
The Jedi Temple infirmary was quiet, illuminated by the soft blue glow of stasis fields. Depa Billaba lay in a healing tank, her wounds treated, though the scars—both physical and mental—would remain.
Mace Windu stood by the observation window, watching the sunset over the city-planet. The spires of the Temple cast long, jagged shadows.
"She will recover," Obi-Wan said, walking up beside him.
"Her body will," Mace replied. "But the rift in this room... I fear that will not heal so easily."
He turned to see Anakin standing at the far end of the hall. The younger Jedi looked isolated, his arms crossed, his face set in a mask of defiance.
"He was willing to kill her, Obi-Wan," Mace whispered. "To protect the mission. To protect us. He saw it as a tactical choice."
"He was desperate," Obi-Wan defended, though his voice lacked its usual conviction. "He felt responsible for her injury and his judgment was clouded by guilt."
"No," Mace said, his voice cold. "It wasn't guilt. It was a lack of value for the individual soul. He sees the galaxy as a game of dejarik, where pieces can be moved and discarded. That is not the Jedi way."
Yoda approached them, his cane tapping rhythmically on the polished floor. He looked at Anakin, then at Mace.
"A dark cloud, I see," Yoda murmured. "Between you two, a wall has been built. Brick by brick, through pride and through fear."
"He needs to be disciplined, Master Yoda," Mace said.
"Discipline, he needs. But understanding, you also need, Mace," Yoda said, looking up at the Master of the Order. "To lead, one must love those they lead. To follow, one must trust the path. Broken, the trust is."
Anakin looked over at them. For a brief moment, his eyes met Mace’s. There was no apology in Skywalker’s gaze—only a simmering resentment, a feeling of being misunderstood by a Council he felt was holding him back from doing what was 'necessary.'
Without a word, Anakin turned and walked away, his footsteps echoing down the long, lonely corridor of the Temple.
Mace Windu watched him go, his hand tightening on his lightsaber. He had spent his life guarding the Republic, but as he looked at the back of the Chosen One, he felt a chilling sensation in the Force—a feeling that the greatest threat to the Jedi was no longer outside their walls, but walking right among them.
"The war is changing us," Obi-Wan sighed.
"The war is merely revealing who we truly are," Mace replied.
In the healing tank, Depa Billaba’s hand twitched in her sleep, a silent witness to the fracture that would one day shatter the galaxy.
"The separatist communications array is shielded from the north," Obi-Wan Kenobi said, wiping sweat from his brow as he adjusted the holoprojector. "If we approach as a single unit, their long-range scanners will pick up our signatures long before we reach the perimeter."
Mace Windu nodded, his dark eyes scanning the dense jungle canopy. "Agreed. We split. Obi-Wan, you and I will circle the western ridge to disable the shield generator. Skywalker, you and Depa will take the eastern pass. Your objective is to secure the landing platform. Do not engage Grievous unless it is absolutely necessary for the mission's success."
Anakin Skywalker adjusted his glove, his blue eyes flickering with a restless energy. "If we have a shot at him, Master, we should take it. Ending Grievous ends the war."
"Caution, Anakin," Depa Billaba said softly, her voice carrying a weight that hadn't been there before the war. She had only recently emerged from a six-month coma following a devastating defeat at the hands of the General on this very planet. Her movements were fluid, yet there was a shadow in her gaze. "Grievous does not fight fairly. He thrives on chaos."
"Then we'll bring the chaos to him," Anakin countered, though he gave her a respectful nod.
The groups parted ways. As Anakin and Depa moved through the thick undergrowth, the silence of the jungle was punctuated only by the distant hum of droid patrols. Anakin pushed forward with an aggressive pace, his senses reaching out through the Force. Suddenly, he froze.
"I feel him," Anakin whispered, crouching behind a massive fern.
Below them, in a clearing near the landing pad, the metallic clatter of General Grievous was unmistakable. The cyborg was standing alone, his back turned, seemingly distracted by a malfunctioning tactical droid.
"It’s a perfect opening," Anakin hissed, his hand hovering over his lightsaber. "If we drop down now, we can pin him before his bodyguards arrive."
Depa laid a hand on his shoulder, her touch firm. "No, Anakin. Something is wrong. The perimeter is too light. It’s a trap."
"It’s an opportunity," Anakin snapped. "I’m not letting him slip away again."
Before Depa could protest further, Anakin ignited his blade—a brilliant flash of sapphire—and leaped from the ridge.
"Anakin, wait!" Depa cried out.
As Anakin descended, the 'malfunctioning' droid suddenly straightened, and the jungle floor erupted. Hidden panels slid back to reveal a dozen IG-100 MagnaGuards, their electrostaffs crackling with purple energy. Grievous spun around, his mechanical laugh a dry, rasping cough.
"Skywalker," the General hissed, his four arms unfolding with sickening mechanical precision. "I expected the Negotiator, but the Hero with no Fear will do nicely."
Anakin was instantly swarmed. He deflected blows with frantic speed, but the MagnaGuards were programmed to exploit the slightest gap in a Jedi’s defense. A staff caught him in the ribs, sending him reeling. Grievous lunged, his four lightsabers spinning like deadly saws.
Depa Billaba didn't hesitate. She plummeted into the fray, her green blade a whirlwind of Chalactan grace. She parried two of Grievous’s blades, positioning herself between the General and the recovering Anakin.
"Run, Anakin! Get to the ridge!" she commanded.
"I'm not leaving you!" Anakin shouted, cutting through a droid’s neck.
Grievous let out a guttural growl. "You will both die here!"
He accelerated his attack, a blur of motion that even a Master of Depa’s caliber struggled to track. The trauma of her previous defeat flickered in her mind—the smell of ozone, the crushing weight of metal. She overextended to block a strike aimed at Anakin’s head. Grievous seized the opening. One of his mechanical feet kicked her with bone-shattering force, and as she fell, he brought a lightsaber down across her torso.
A scream tore from Depa's throat as she collapsed.
"Depa!" Anakin roared. He tapped into a well of dark frustration, unleashing a Force push that sent the MagnaGuards flying and momentarily staggered Grievous. He scooped up Depa’s limp form and retreated into the dense fog, his lungs burning as he sprinted toward the rendezvous point.
***
The small, abandoned stone hut on the cliffside offered little protection, but it was all they had. Rain began to lash against the roof as Mace Windu and Obi-Wan Kenobi arrived, having heard the commotion.
Mace dropped to his knees beside Depa, his face a mask of controlled fury as he saw the cauterized wound across her chest. She was unconscious, her breathing shallow and ragged.
"What happened?" Mace’s voice was a low, dangerous rumble.
"We saw an opening," Anakin said, pacing the small room, his cloak torn. "Grievous was right there. I thought—"
"You thought?" Mace stood up, looming over the younger man. "You were ordered to secure the platform, not to indulge your arrogance. You fell for the most transparent trap in the General’s book, and Depa paid the price for your recklessness."
"I was trying to end the war, Master Windu!" Anakin shouted back. "If I had been a second faster—"
"If you had been a second more disciplined, she wouldn't be dying!" Mace stepped into Anakin’s personal space, his Vaapad-trained energy radiating off him in waves. "You lack the restraint of a Master, Skywalker. Your impulsiveness is a rot in this Order."
"Enough!" Obi-Wan stepped between them, his hands raised. "Mace, fighting him won't heal Depa. Anakin, sit down. We are surrounded."
The sound of mechanical footsteps echoed outside. Hundreds of droids were closing in, led by the rhythmic 'thump-clank' of the General.
Anakin looked at the door, then at Depa, then at the window. His eyes were desperate. "We can't hold this hut. Not with her in this state. If we try to carry her out, Grievous will catch us in the open and kill all three of us."
"We are not leaving her," Mace said flatly.
Anakin turned to Mace, his expression darkening. "Listen to me. If we use Depa as a distraction—if we leave her here with a thermal detonator rigged to the door—we can draw Grievous in. When he goes for the trophy, we strike from the roof. We sacrifice one to take out the monster. It’s the only way to ensure the rest of us survive and the mission succeeds."
The silence that followed was suffocating.
Mace Windu’s hand flew to his lightsaber hilt. "You would suggest sacrificing a member of the Council? Your fellow Jedi? Have you lost your mind, Skywalker?"
"I’m being a realist!" Anakin yelled. "Look at her! She can’t move! If we stay, we all die, and Grievous wins. Is that what you want? To die for a sense of honor while the galaxy burns?"
"It is not honor, it is life!" Mace’s voice shook with rage. "We do not trade lives. That is the path to the dark side, a path I see you walking more clearly every day."
"I am trying to save you!" Anakin stepped forward, his chest heaving. "I am trying to save the Republic!"
"You are trying to hide your failure behind a cold-blooded murder," Mace hissed.
Obi-Wan looked between them, his heart sinking. The bond between the Jedi was fraying before his eyes. "Anakin, that is enough. We will defend this position together. We do not abandon our own."
"Then we die for nothing," Anakin whispered, turning away to stare at the door.
Outside, the rasping voice of Grievous drifted through the cracks in the stone. "Jedi! I can smell your fear. Come out and face your end, or I shall burn this hovel to ash with you inside!"
Mace Windu ignited his purple blade, the light reflecting in his eyes. "Get ready."
The door exploded inward. Grievous charged, his sabers spinning in a kaleidoscope of death. Mace met him head-on, their blades clashing with a shower of sparks that illuminated the cramped hut. Anakin and Obi-Wan took the flanks, hacking through the B2 super battle droids that poured through the breach.
The fight was desperate. The hut was too small for the Jedi to use their mobility. Mace pushed Grievous back with sheer physical power, but the General used his mechanical weight to pin Mace against the back wall.
"Your apprentice failed you, Windu," Grievous laughed, his metal fingers clawing at Mace’s throat. "And now, you shall join her!"
Just as Grievous raised his sabers for a killing blow, a brilliant, shimmering green light filled the room.
A wave of pure Force energy surged through the hut, not with the violence of a blast, but with the irresistible weight of the ocean. Grievous was hurled backward, crashing through the stone wall and into the mud outside. The droids were swept away like autumn leaves.
In the doorway stood a small, hunched figure leaning on a gnarled wooden cane. Behind him, the roar of LAAT/i gunships drowned out the storm, and dozens of clone troopers in the colors of the 41st Elite Corps rappelled from the sky.
"Patience, you must have, Master Windu," Yoda said, his ears twitching as he looked at the wreckage of the room. "Arrived, the reinforcements have."
Mace exhaled, his shoulders sagging as the adrenaline began to fade. He looked at Anakin, who wouldn't meet his gaze.
"Master Yoda," Obi-Wan said, his voice filled with relief. "Your timing is, as always, impeccable."
"Meditated on the Force, I did," Yoda said, walking slowly toward the unconscious Depa. He placed a small hand on her forehead, closing his eyes. "Much pain, I feel. Much anger. Dangerous, this conflict is."
***
The journey back to Coruscant was silent.
The Jedi Temple infirmary was quiet, illuminated by the soft blue glow of stasis fields. Depa Billaba lay in a healing tank, her wounds treated, though the scars—both physical and mental—would remain.
Mace Windu stood by the observation window, watching the sunset over the city-planet. The spires of the Temple cast long, jagged shadows.
"She will recover," Obi-Wan said, walking up beside him.
"Her body will," Mace replied. "But the rift in this room... I fear that will not heal so easily."
He turned to see Anakin standing at the far end of the hall. The younger Jedi looked isolated, his arms crossed, his face set in a mask of defiance.
"He was willing to kill her, Obi-Wan," Mace whispered. "To protect the mission. To protect us. He saw it as a tactical choice."
"He was desperate," Obi-Wan defended, though his voice lacked its usual conviction. "He felt responsible for her injury and his judgment was clouded by guilt."
"No," Mace said, his voice cold. "It wasn't guilt. It was a lack of value for the individual soul. He sees the galaxy as a game of dejarik, where pieces can be moved and discarded. That is not the Jedi way."
Yoda approached them, his cane tapping rhythmically on the polished floor. He looked at Anakin, then at Mace.
"A dark cloud, I see," Yoda murmured. "Between you two, a wall has been built. Brick by brick, through pride and through fear."
"He needs to be disciplined, Master Yoda," Mace said.
"Discipline, he needs. But understanding, you also need, Mace," Yoda said, looking up at the Master of the Order. "To lead, one must love those they lead. To follow, one must trust the path. Broken, the trust is."
Anakin looked over at them. For a brief moment, his eyes met Mace’s. There was no apology in Skywalker’s gaze—only a simmering resentment, a feeling of being misunderstood by a Council he felt was holding him back from doing what was 'necessary.'
Without a word, Anakin turned and walked away, his footsteps echoing down the long, lonely corridor of the Temple.
Mace Windu watched him go, his hand tightening on his lightsaber. He had spent his life guarding the Republic, but as he looked at the back of the Chosen One, he felt a chilling sensation in the Force—a feeling that the greatest threat to the Jedi was no longer outside their walls, but walking right among them.
"The war is changing us," Obi-Wan sighed.
"The war is merely revealing who we truly are," Mace replied.
In the healing tank, Depa Billaba’s hand twitched in her sleep, a silent witness to the fracture that would one day shatter the galaxy.
