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Steel garden
Fandom: original
Criado: 13/04/2026
Tags
DramaPsicológicoDistopiaEstudo de PersonagemSombrioDivergênciaSátiraAngústiaCiúmesDor/Conforto
the glass-walled observatory
the air in the student council’s private viewing box smelled of bergamot and expensive silk. it was a sterile, pressurized environment, high above the main auditorium where the common students scrambled for social relevance. below them, the debate stage glowed under harsh white spotlights, making the two participants look like specimens under a microscope.
ari sat in the center chair, their posture so perfectly straight it looked painful, though their expression suggested they were halfway to a nap. they didn't blink as they watched the girl on the left—the new one, umiri—fumble with her note cards. ari’s fingers toyed with a singular, matte-black poker chip, flipping it over their knuckles in a rhythmic, hypnotic motion.
"she’s shaking," kira murmured, his voice a soft, honeyed caress that didn't match the predatory gleam in his eyes. he leaned forward, resting his chin on a pale hand. "look at her pulse in her neck. she’s terrified. it’s almost sweet, isn’t it, loyd?"
loyd, standing a respectful distance behind them, poured steaming tea into a delicate bone china cup. his movements were silent, efficient. "her heart rate is approximately one hundred and ten beats per minute, based on the visible tremors in her hands. quite inefficient for a formal debate on classical philosophy."
"she looks like a lost puppy in a butcher shop," mono snapped, adjusting the lapels of his limited-edition velvet blazer. he had changed into this outfit barely twenty minutes ago, and he was already checking his reflection in the glass. "that hair... is she serious? it’s so... round. and those shoes? middle-class sensibilities are so visually offensive. i hope yamada crushes her quickly so i can go change again. i'm thinking the pinstripe for the evening matches."
saya was crouched on the floor near ari’s boots, poking at a loose thread on the carpet. she let out a sudden, jagged laugh that made mono flinch. "the cat! the cat saw her! it ran! it knew! she has the smell of... of... wet paper! she’s going to melt under the lights! pop! like a bubble!"
saya’s face contorted into a wide, toothy grin as she looked up at ari, her eyes wide and unblinking. "ari-ari, do you think she tastes like sugar? she looks like she’s made of pink sugar and tears."
ari didn't look down at her. their voice came out in a low, bored drawl. "she tastes like nothing, saya. she’s a vacuum. a zero. she has no place here."
down on the stage, the moderator—a stern-faced boy named sato—cleared his throat. "the topic is the divergence of metaphysical reality: aristotle’s empiricism versus plato’s theory of forms. mr. yamada, you have the floor for rebuttal."
yamada, a third-year with a wealth ranking in the top fifty, didn't even look at his notes. he was a shark who had scented blood. "it is clear my opponent hasn't grasped the fundamental nature of the 'form.' she speaks of beauty as a tangible quality, failing to realize that in the platonic sense, she is merely looking at a shadow on a cave wall. her arguments are as flimsy as her family’s... modest standing."
a few titters broke out in the audience. umiri flinched, her big brown eyes welling with moisture. she looked small, her thin frame drowning in the school blazer. she clutched the podium as if it were a life raft.
"i... i just think," umiri started, her voice cracking. "i think that if we ignore what we can touch and feel, like aristotle says... then we lose the heart of why we’re here. plato is so... cold. don't you think it’s lonely to believe nothing we see is real?"
"this is pathetic," ari said, the black chip stopping mid-flip. "she’s bringing 'loneliness' into a debate about ancient metaphysics. loyd, remind me why we allowed a middle-class charity case to skip the entrance exam?"
"her brother-in-law’s conglomerate handles thirty percent of our offshore logistics, ari-sama," loyd replied smoothly, handing ari the tea. "it was a strategic courtesy."
"a boring one," ari sighed. they stood up, the movement fluid and effortless. "i’m going to the lounge. call me when the actual gambling starts. watching a girl drown in a puddle isn't entertainment; it’s a chore."
ari began to walk toward the exit, their footsteps echoing in the quiet box. but as they reached the door, the moderator’s voice rose, amplified by the speakers.
"representative ari? you are required to remain for the duration of the official ranking matches as the presiding witness," sato said, his voice trembling slightly but holding firm to the bylaws.
ari stopped. they turned their head slowly, a cold, sharp light entering their eyes. they walked back to the glass, leaning over the railing.
"sato," ari said, their voice barely a whisper, yet it seemed to fill the room. "do you find my presence necessary for the outcome of this... tragedy? or are you simply lonely up there?"
sato swallowed hard. "the... the regulations state—"
"the regulations are my dinner guest, and i am feeling quite full," ari interrupted, their tone flat. "however, since you’ve wasted my time by making me speak, i’ll stay for the final five minutes. but if the girl cries, i’m holding you personally responsible for the dampening of my mood."
ari sat back down, crossing their legs. they looked at their watch. "five minutes, yamada. finish her."
on the stage, umiri looked up at the council box. she could see the silhouettes behind the glass. she looked back at yamada, who was laughing.
"you’re a joke," yamada whispered, leaning across the gap between their podiums. "you don't belong in koen. you’re just a pet that hasn't been tagged yet. give up. apologize for wasting everyone’s time."
umiri’s lip trembled. a tear actually escaped, rolling down her cheek. mono groaned loudly, and kira leaned in, his smile widening in anticipation of the total collapse.
but then, umiri did something strange. she didn't wipe the tear away. she didn't look at her notes. she stepped out from behind the podium, walking right up to yamada’s side of the stage. the audience went silent. it was a massive breach of debate etiquette.
"you’re right," umiri said. her voice wasn't shaking anymore. it was soft, breathless, and intensely personal. "i am way out of my depth. i stayed up all night reading those books, but they’re so hard, aren't they? all those big words just to say that we’re all looking for something real."
yamada blinked, taken aback by her proximity. "what are you doing? get back to your side."
"i saw your father’s interview in the magazine last week," umiri continued, her brown eyes fixed on his with an unsettling, wide-eyed sincerity. "he’s so successful. it must be so hard, having to be perfect like him. is that why you like plato? because you want there to be a perfect version of yourself somewhere else, because this one... this one feels like it’s never enough?"
yamada froze. the aggressive sneer on his face faltered. "that’s... that has nothing to do with—"
"i’m not smart like you," umiri said, reaching out as if to touch his arm, then pulling back shyly. "but i can see how much pressure you’re under. you’re so brilliant, yamada-kun. you don't need to crush someone like me to prove it. aristotle would say your excellence is a habit, right? you’ve already won. you’ve won because you’re you. why does it have to be a fight?"
she smiled at him—a wobbly, sweet, entirely genuine smile that radiated a warmth that had no business being in that cold auditorium. she looked like a girl who truly, deeply cared about the internal struggles of the boy who was trying to humiliate her.
yamada’s face went red. not with anger, but with a deep, confused flush. he looked at the audience, then back at her. the logical scaffolding of his argument—the cold, hard facts he had used to dismantle her—seemed to melt in the face of her raw, embarrassing vulnerability. he looked like he wanted to argue, but he also looked like he wanted to buy her a soda and tell her about his childhood.
"i... i mean," yamada stammered. "the point of the divergence is... well... you have a point about the emotional resonance of the aristotelian view..."
the moderator stared, his mouth agape. "mr. yamada? your closing statement?"
yamada looked at umiri. she was looking at him like he was a hero. he cleared his throat, his posture collapsing from 'predator' to 'awkward teenager.'
"i think... i think the debate has reached a point where both sides have... merit," yamada said lamely. "i yield my remaining time."
sato blinked. "you... you yield? then... by the power vested in me, given the lack of a definitive logical conclusion and the concession of the affirmative's aggressive stance... i declare this match a tie."
a tie. in koen, a tie was unheard of. it meant no money changed hands. it meant no one was crushed. it was a glitch in the system.
in the council box, the silence was deafening.
saya was the first to react, letting out a high-pitched, manic giggle. "the puppy bit back! no, she didn't bite! she licked him! she licked him and he turned into butter! look at him! he’s melting!"
mono was staring at the glass, his jaw dropped. "he just... he gave up. he had her! she was dead! why did he stop? that was so... so gross! so sweet it makes my teeth ache!"
kira’s smile hadn't left his face, but it had changed. it was no longer amused; it was contemplative. "she didn't use logic. she used him. she turned his own ego into a soft pillow and laid her head on it. how... fascinatingly cruel."
ari didn't move. they were sitting forward now, the black poker chip gripped tightly in their palm. for the first time that day—perhaps for the first time that month—the boredom had completely evaporated from their face.
their eyes were narrowed, fixed on the small, curly-haired girl on the stage who was currently shaking yamada’s hand with both of hers, looking like the happiest person in the world.
ari didn't like anomalies. they liked patterns. they liked the predictable trajectory of the strong devouring the weak. umiri yoimiya was weak—ari could see it in the way she carried herself, in the neurodivergent flutter of her hands, in her inability to hide a single emotion.
and yet, she had just broken the system without even trying. or had she?
"loyd," ari said, their voice no longer a drawl, but a sharp, cold edge.
"yes, ari-sama?"
"get me everything on her. not just the family finances. i want to know what she eats, what she reads, and exactly how many times she cries in a day."
ari stood up and walked to the glass, pressing a hand against it. down below, umiri looked up at the box again. for a split second, their eyes met. umiri gave a tiny, hesitant wave, her face full of that same, sickeningly sweet optimism.
ari’s lip curled in a silent, predatory snarl.
"you aren't a vacuum at all, are you?" ari whispered to the glass. "you’re something much more annoying."
the lights in the auditorium dimmed as the session ended, but ari remained at the window, watching the girl depart. the game had changed. the entertainment had finally arrived.
ari sat in the center chair, their posture so perfectly straight it looked painful, though their expression suggested they were halfway to a nap. they didn't blink as they watched the girl on the left—the new one, umiri—fumble with her note cards. ari’s fingers toyed with a singular, matte-black poker chip, flipping it over their knuckles in a rhythmic, hypnotic motion.
"she’s shaking," kira murmured, his voice a soft, honeyed caress that didn't match the predatory gleam in his eyes. he leaned forward, resting his chin on a pale hand. "look at her pulse in her neck. she’s terrified. it’s almost sweet, isn’t it, loyd?"
loyd, standing a respectful distance behind them, poured steaming tea into a delicate bone china cup. his movements were silent, efficient. "her heart rate is approximately one hundred and ten beats per minute, based on the visible tremors in her hands. quite inefficient for a formal debate on classical philosophy."
"she looks like a lost puppy in a butcher shop," mono snapped, adjusting the lapels of his limited-edition velvet blazer. he had changed into this outfit barely twenty minutes ago, and he was already checking his reflection in the glass. "that hair... is she serious? it’s so... round. and those shoes? middle-class sensibilities are so visually offensive. i hope yamada crushes her quickly so i can go change again. i'm thinking the pinstripe for the evening matches."
saya was crouched on the floor near ari’s boots, poking at a loose thread on the carpet. she let out a sudden, jagged laugh that made mono flinch. "the cat! the cat saw her! it ran! it knew! she has the smell of... of... wet paper! she’s going to melt under the lights! pop! like a bubble!"
saya’s face contorted into a wide, toothy grin as she looked up at ari, her eyes wide and unblinking. "ari-ari, do you think she tastes like sugar? she looks like she’s made of pink sugar and tears."
ari didn't look down at her. their voice came out in a low, bored drawl. "she tastes like nothing, saya. she’s a vacuum. a zero. she has no place here."
down on the stage, the moderator—a stern-faced boy named sato—cleared his throat. "the topic is the divergence of metaphysical reality: aristotle’s empiricism versus plato’s theory of forms. mr. yamada, you have the floor for rebuttal."
yamada, a third-year with a wealth ranking in the top fifty, didn't even look at his notes. he was a shark who had scented blood. "it is clear my opponent hasn't grasped the fundamental nature of the 'form.' she speaks of beauty as a tangible quality, failing to realize that in the platonic sense, she is merely looking at a shadow on a cave wall. her arguments are as flimsy as her family’s... modest standing."
a few titters broke out in the audience. umiri flinched, her big brown eyes welling with moisture. she looked small, her thin frame drowning in the school blazer. she clutched the podium as if it were a life raft.
"i... i just think," umiri started, her voice cracking. "i think that if we ignore what we can touch and feel, like aristotle says... then we lose the heart of why we’re here. plato is so... cold. don't you think it’s lonely to believe nothing we see is real?"
"this is pathetic," ari said, the black chip stopping mid-flip. "she’s bringing 'loneliness' into a debate about ancient metaphysics. loyd, remind me why we allowed a middle-class charity case to skip the entrance exam?"
"her brother-in-law’s conglomerate handles thirty percent of our offshore logistics, ari-sama," loyd replied smoothly, handing ari the tea. "it was a strategic courtesy."
"a boring one," ari sighed. they stood up, the movement fluid and effortless. "i’m going to the lounge. call me when the actual gambling starts. watching a girl drown in a puddle isn't entertainment; it’s a chore."
ari began to walk toward the exit, their footsteps echoing in the quiet box. but as they reached the door, the moderator’s voice rose, amplified by the speakers.
"representative ari? you are required to remain for the duration of the official ranking matches as the presiding witness," sato said, his voice trembling slightly but holding firm to the bylaws.
ari stopped. they turned their head slowly, a cold, sharp light entering their eyes. they walked back to the glass, leaning over the railing.
"sato," ari said, their voice barely a whisper, yet it seemed to fill the room. "do you find my presence necessary for the outcome of this... tragedy? or are you simply lonely up there?"
sato swallowed hard. "the... the regulations state—"
"the regulations are my dinner guest, and i am feeling quite full," ari interrupted, their tone flat. "however, since you’ve wasted my time by making me speak, i’ll stay for the final five minutes. but if the girl cries, i’m holding you personally responsible for the dampening of my mood."
ari sat back down, crossing their legs. they looked at their watch. "five minutes, yamada. finish her."
on the stage, umiri looked up at the council box. she could see the silhouettes behind the glass. she looked back at yamada, who was laughing.
"you’re a joke," yamada whispered, leaning across the gap between their podiums. "you don't belong in koen. you’re just a pet that hasn't been tagged yet. give up. apologize for wasting everyone’s time."
umiri’s lip trembled. a tear actually escaped, rolling down her cheek. mono groaned loudly, and kira leaned in, his smile widening in anticipation of the total collapse.
but then, umiri did something strange. she didn't wipe the tear away. she didn't look at her notes. she stepped out from behind the podium, walking right up to yamada’s side of the stage. the audience went silent. it was a massive breach of debate etiquette.
"you’re right," umiri said. her voice wasn't shaking anymore. it was soft, breathless, and intensely personal. "i am way out of my depth. i stayed up all night reading those books, but they’re so hard, aren't they? all those big words just to say that we’re all looking for something real."
yamada blinked, taken aback by her proximity. "what are you doing? get back to your side."
"i saw your father’s interview in the magazine last week," umiri continued, her brown eyes fixed on his with an unsettling, wide-eyed sincerity. "he’s so successful. it must be so hard, having to be perfect like him. is that why you like plato? because you want there to be a perfect version of yourself somewhere else, because this one... this one feels like it’s never enough?"
yamada froze. the aggressive sneer on his face faltered. "that’s... that has nothing to do with—"
"i’m not smart like you," umiri said, reaching out as if to touch his arm, then pulling back shyly. "but i can see how much pressure you’re under. you’re so brilliant, yamada-kun. you don't need to crush someone like me to prove it. aristotle would say your excellence is a habit, right? you’ve already won. you’ve won because you’re you. why does it have to be a fight?"
she smiled at him—a wobbly, sweet, entirely genuine smile that radiated a warmth that had no business being in that cold auditorium. she looked like a girl who truly, deeply cared about the internal struggles of the boy who was trying to humiliate her.
yamada’s face went red. not with anger, but with a deep, confused flush. he looked at the audience, then back at her. the logical scaffolding of his argument—the cold, hard facts he had used to dismantle her—seemed to melt in the face of her raw, embarrassing vulnerability. he looked like he wanted to argue, but he also looked like he wanted to buy her a soda and tell her about his childhood.
"i... i mean," yamada stammered. "the point of the divergence is... well... you have a point about the emotional resonance of the aristotelian view..."
the moderator stared, his mouth agape. "mr. yamada? your closing statement?"
yamada looked at umiri. she was looking at him like he was a hero. he cleared his throat, his posture collapsing from 'predator' to 'awkward teenager.'
"i think... i think the debate has reached a point where both sides have... merit," yamada said lamely. "i yield my remaining time."
sato blinked. "you... you yield? then... by the power vested in me, given the lack of a definitive logical conclusion and the concession of the affirmative's aggressive stance... i declare this match a tie."
a tie. in koen, a tie was unheard of. it meant no money changed hands. it meant no one was crushed. it was a glitch in the system.
in the council box, the silence was deafening.
saya was the first to react, letting out a high-pitched, manic giggle. "the puppy bit back! no, she didn't bite! she licked him! she licked him and he turned into butter! look at him! he’s melting!"
mono was staring at the glass, his jaw dropped. "he just... he gave up. he had her! she was dead! why did he stop? that was so... so gross! so sweet it makes my teeth ache!"
kira’s smile hadn't left his face, but it had changed. it was no longer amused; it was contemplative. "she didn't use logic. she used him. she turned his own ego into a soft pillow and laid her head on it. how... fascinatingly cruel."
ari didn't move. they were sitting forward now, the black poker chip gripped tightly in their palm. for the first time that day—perhaps for the first time that month—the boredom had completely evaporated from their face.
their eyes were narrowed, fixed on the small, curly-haired girl on the stage who was currently shaking yamada’s hand with both of hers, looking like the happiest person in the world.
ari didn't like anomalies. they liked patterns. they liked the predictable trajectory of the strong devouring the weak. umiri yoimiya was weak—ari could see it in the way she carried herself, in the neurodivergent flutter of her hands, in her inability to hide a single emotion.
and yet, she had just broken the system without even trying. or had she?
"loyd," ari said, their voice no longer a drawl, but a sharp, cold edge.
"yes, ari-sama?"
"get me everything on her. not just the family finances. i want to know what she eats, what she reads, and exactly how many times she cries in a day."
ari stood up and walked to the glass, pressing a hand against it. down below, umiri looked up at the box again. for a split second, their eyes met. umiri gave a tiny, hesitant wave, her face full of that same, sickeningly sweet optimism.
ari’s lip curled in a silent, predatory snarl.
"you aren't a vacuum at all, are you?" ari whispered to the glass. "you’re something much more annoying."
the lights in the auditorium dimmed as the session ended, but ari remained at the window, watching the girl depart. the game had changed. the entertainment had finally arrived.
